Object Essay Continued

So now after visiting the writing center twice, and getting some awesome advice from barry my writing center tutor and having my group conference with my class mates and Robin. I really do think that my Object Essay is pretty good for my first ever college essay. I have always been told that I can write pretty well, and I really believe that once I finally sit down and just start busting out thoughts and ideas from my head. I really think I can work words and sentences pretty well. Now someone who reads this (Robin) might think that I am pretty confident about my work, but after you grade my paper, it might show something different. I think it is very important to have confidence in your work no matter that be a paper, or a mowed lawn, or even a cleaned bathroom after many days or weeks of dirtyness. I just hope that my true hard work and me getting through problems while trying to finish this paper shines through. I guess we will see. I can only hope for the best.